Mario
Henriquez
Professor:
Dr. Smith
March
17, 2014
“Change
the subject, I’ve already knew the truth”
How would you react, when somebody
comes to you and talk about a subject or something that you already know? Image
that someone approach to you saying something that you are familiar with, and
his or her explanations or facts are opposite of what you knew. In the passage
of “ I Know the Truth, So Don’t Bother Me With Facts,” by Jeffrey Kluger show
us how people react when someone present an opinion or a case on a specific
subject that a person already knew but that person who you are presenting the
facts act differently because you and him or her has different belief. Kluger says: "Even when people do take time to learn
the facts, however, the effort often does no good." It is difficult
to convince someone who believe in something and you come to tell that person
something opposite of their believe, no matter, the facts that you show to that
person, your efforts could be useless because you do not know how long it will
take to that person to accept the facts. I consider that, if someone is
presenting me a subject about something that I already knew, I will hear that
person because it could give me more details or changed something that I knew but could be totally wrong.
My neighbor was
worried about the health care policies of Barack Obama. I told her the
different options that she could make. However, she told me that I was wrong
because she heard from somebody else that if she does not have a health
insurance, she has to pay a penalty. I explained her that: “ If you are
working, your company supposed to offer you a health insurance but if they do
not offer you that, you should go by yourself and apply for health insurance
because it is important to have that in case if something happen to you.” She
told me that, she also is afraid because they might charge her a lot of money
and she does not make sufficient money to pay insurance. I told her that: “It
depends on how much you earn, for example, maybe you are earning less than a
thousand and they will approve your case.” I convinced her after a long
conversation, and next day she went to get the information in the health care
office. On the same day afternoon, I saw her and she told me that, she found
the information that she needed and presented her income and her case will be
approve because she is not earning enough money. My neighbor, resulted her
problem, however she knew about the case but did not have too much details.
This passage
reminds me of, an article that I read about Christopher Columbus. I believe
that he was a hero and a big character in the America history but the article
that I read, was showing facts that were against of my believes. It was saying
that Christopher Columbus is true that he was a big and important character in
America history but he destroyed a lot of human being, which was Indians in the
Caribbean. He was a criminal because he killed and mistreat slaves. For that
moment, I felt offended because of my believe but I started to think and
realized that, what was saying in the article was true because in my country,
the Dominican Republic, we are mixed of Europeans and Africans. Columbus when
arrived there, they were Indians and they were killed by his soldiers. In the
history book only explain, the good side of the history but it does not mention
a lot of bad things that Christopher Columbus did. Everything has a logical meaning,
before he arrived as I mentioned people were living in that island and the
colonist invaded the entire territory and killed everyone. A lot of people like
me, or some of them takes time to realize something true that is familiar, as
Kluger explained before we take time to change our believe.
As I mention
before, it is good to know about a subject or a case that someone is presenting
you because you will have knowledge of what the other person is saying.
Probably, you will feel uncomfortable because you believe in something that is
totally opposite of the other person but you should hear his or her points of
view because both can share and obtain more experience.
I think this a very well summarized and be able to establish your points. I think this absolutely fine easy.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sabuj, any advice to improve something?
DeleteGood length and some nice details. Work on clarifying your claim and reasons.
ReplyDeleteIn the introduction you repeat yourself.
ReplyDelete"How would you react, when somebody comes to you and talk about a subject or something that you already know?" is the same as "Image that someone approach to you saying something that you are familiar with, and his or her explanations or facts are opposite of what you knew"
i don't see the main idea so clearly presented. your thesis is about the effort of convincing for what i understand, but in your second body paragraph you said only took you an article to read to change your your mind.
i hope i get a piece of your mind. from my essay.